Under the sea

This week one of the writing jobs the Meerkats and Zebras had to do was to improve a sentence Miss Cruz wrote. She showed us this picture of a man snorkelling and the boring sentence she had wrote: 'The man is swimming'. Our challenge was to create a new sentence to describe the picture that was more interesting and detailed. Here are the new and improved sentences!

The zebra fish is in the warm and cold water.

The zebra fish swim in the deep water.

The dad is in the warm water and the zebra fish are nice.

Zach is swimming and he saw a spinosaurus!

The man is swimming in the water. The man saw a stripy fish!

The zebra fish is in the warm water. They are black and white and yellow.

The man is diving in the ocean.

The man is swimming in the deepest water.

The person is in the hot water and he is looking for the rainbow fish.

The man is swimming in the water. The man saw a zebra fish!